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Al*na  

  • Status: Member
  • General Poet
  • Female/United States
  • Offline for 5w 22h 24m 49s
  • Deviant since Dec 25, 2005, 10:05 PM
  • 23 Deviations
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  • 163 Deviation Comments
  • 24 Deviant Comments
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Misconception

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Sundial at Sundown
in Statues & Monuments on 4/12/08
Rusting Memories
in Transportation on 12/28/07
Misconception
in Open on 4/25/07
No Peace i FindNo Peace i Find  
(a commentary on genocide)   
my heart is in a thousand pieces,  i want to be everywhere; share all.  Shards of my glass soul scatter the globe.  Earth’s innocent blood gushes; half blood, half water:  it covers my crumbling heart.   
Pure blood of the people hangs like mist.  Staining the sky ruby, a blood bath,    their tears precipitate to Heaven.  Their screams drowned out by the hum-dum of our iPods  as we flip straight to the comics.   
At noon and five the world is shackled.  The morning edition, served decaf,  tells th No Peace i Find
in Open on 3/9/07
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CandleIf I light a candle so to see your face,  Will it somehow cool this body of wax?  Or will I continue to melt for you  As I become as thin as a paper slice?   
I notice your heart, and I would chase  It to the end of the earth for the facts  Needed to sculpt this romantic pool  That is becoming like stone; how nice…   
Well, not really, since I’d like to erase  This invulnerability to hear your sax;  You know, those tones that come soothingly  From your mouth, oh, so precise.   
For just one more day, I’d give you my heart again  If, in the end, this candle will he Candle
by *LordAzrael85
Girl on a train 245.   
 
 
         There should be a poem for every girl           with black hair and black eyes           who's sat across the aisle on a crowded train           and written pointless beautiful things           in the notebook in her lap.   
         I might write my name and number on a bit of paper     &nb Girl on a train 245
by ~LazyLinePainterJohn
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Devious Information

  • Current Age: 19
  • Current Residence: Miami University OH
  • Interests: singing, writing, piano, walks, training for a triathlon, acapella groups, musicals
  • Favourite movie: Phantom of the Opera
  • Favourite band or musician: Jack's Mannequin
  • Favourite poet or writer: =inmyroom
  • Favourite photographer: Nyasa
  • MP3 player of choice: iPod nano, but that's just because it's what I have. iRivers are better if you ask me.
  • Skin of choice: the skin I'm in :-)
  • Favourite game: videogame- DDR but Kingdom Hearts is sweet too; gameshow- Wheel of Fortune; board game- Catch Phrase
  • Favourite cartoon character: Do Jasmin or Mulan count?
  • Personal Quote: Hakuna matata
  • Tools of the Trade: mechanical pencils, loose-leaf college ruled paper, and my sweet 17" Dell

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~EMujaAlBhed:iconEMujaAlBhed: May 3, 2007, 10:58:43 PM
Hey!!! I just now logged on for the first time in awhile. Thanks for stopping by!

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I set this to sticky... whazzat mean?
*LordAzrael85:iconLordAzrael85: Apr 7, 2007, 1:31:41 PM
Thanks for the interest in my poetry lately! I'll be sure to keep tabs on yours too.

If you ever get the chance, you should check out one of my newer poems titled "Candle"; it's inspired by one of yours, so you may enjoy it.

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Reality is just one dream-walk away...
~02a:icon02a: Mar 12, 2007, 9:57:21 AM Mood: Joy
hey thanks a lot for comment...

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i m alive because i m alive....
~jellyfishofgod:iconjellyfishofgod: Feb 3, 2007, 3:39:23 PM
Hi, I know it was ages ago (in August),but thanks for all your comments and for the fave on inadequate! I haven't been on here for like 5 months or something and what a nice surprise somebody liked my stuff! Im gonna check out ur stuff now cheers!

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"You're not only wrong - you're stupid and you're ugly, just like your mum."
~AJ43837:iconAJ43837: Dec 10, 2006, 9:29:35 PM
thank you :)

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Dessert...
[link]

My novel - ch 1 [link]

"But why is the rum gone? If this was a dream there would be rum"
~urmyfavrt:iconurmyfavrt: Dec 10, 2006, 9:27:12 AM
ThankYOU for sharing your great artwork!

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Come look at my work and comment... I love critique!
~urmyfavrt:iconurmyfavrt: Dec 10, 2006, 9:26:36 AM
Sure :-) It was a pleasure. You have some interesting work.

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Come look at my work and comment... I love critique!
~AJ43837:iconAJ43837: Dec 9, 2006, 11:00:41 PM
thank you for your comment and visting my gallery :gallery:

:hug:

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Dessert...
[link]

My novel - ch 1 [link]

"But why is the rum gone? If this was a dream there would be rum"
~xtaintedxromancex:iconxtaintedxromancex: Dec 9, 2006, 9:15:53 PM
Thanks for the comments! =D

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There's a fine line between feeling alive and living a lie <3
~zebrazebrazebra:iconzebrazebrazebra: Oct 23, 2006, 6:50:17 AM
Cheers for the favourite, mittens! :aww:
~Nyasa:iconNyasa: Oct 20, 2006, 7:37:53 PM
Your writing style is pretty good, especially for your age, most of the poems offer at least some truly unique lines at the least. Keep it up. plus watch

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"An ounce of perception, a pound of obscure" -- Rush
One cannot run a country like one runs a business.
~urmyfavrt:iconurmyfavrt: Oct 15, 2006, 12:54:07 PM
Haha, yeah, college is definitely hard. You HAVE to work a lot more to get by here, but it's so worth it. I don't know what the best thing about college is, but it's definitely awesome to stay up as late as you want whenever you want- no curfew (yahoo!), and make your own decisions. I'm having a lot of fun... it's GrrrrrEAT! :-)
~Tukiko:iconTukiko: Oct 15, 2006, 9:25:22 AM
Isn't college really hard? I bet it's nice to be on your own though. It's like an adventure and you get to make all of your own decisions without parents being in the way. As much as I love my parents I think it would be nice. XD
~urmyfavrt:iconurmyfavrt: Oct 14, 2006, 1:41:17 PM
Oh, sad!! Feel better! I'm great actually... I really love college! I'm on break too, which is cool!
~urmyfavrt:iconurmyfavrt: Oct 14, 2006, 1:40:40 PM
Thanks so much... that really means a lot
~wukurd:iconwukurd: Oct 14, 2006, 1:22:13 PM
Thank you for the favorite.

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Fuck the Faux.

"My friend, you would not tell with such high zest
To children ardent for some desperate glory,
The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est
Pro patria mori."-Wilfred Owen
~NostalgiaOfMud:iconNostalgiaOfMud: Oct 11, 2006, 4:40:46 AM
Thanks for the favourite on 'First Love'. I had a look at your work..you have a gift.
~Tukiko:iconTukiko: Oct 10, 2006, 2:11:31 PM
I'm alright. Currently I'm sick though. =[
So how are you?
~urmyfavrt:iconurmyfavrt: Oct 10, 2006, 1:58:14 PM
Sure, and I sure did! :-)
~HerrheRR:iconHerrheRR: Oct 10, 2006, 1:04:13 PM
thank you for your comment, i am glad you liked it:)

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when will children learn to let their wildernesses burn?
and love will be new, never cold and vacant.
~xxxdark:iconxxxdark: Sep 27, 2006, 6:59:09 AM
thank you so much for your :+fav on the girl who stole the moon means so much!

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I was alone, falling free
Trying my best not to forget
What happened to us, what happened to me
// Placebo - Meds
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~SilentXPartner:iconSilentXPartner: Aug 29, 2006, 8:50:01 AM
thanks for the favorite add :)
~snowXpaintedXred:iconsnowXpaintedXred: Aug 28, 2006, 11:48:58 PM
Thank you for commenting on one of my recent poems. I have read some of your work and I'm impressed. You see, the rejection and pain from my last relationship drives a lot of my work while the joy of love and its mysteries helps convey your outlook. Every once-in-a-while I like reading about how "in love" others are and you're poetry has given me a smile to go to bed with...It's like 2:47 a.m. here and I think I'm gettin' a little delirious...anyway, thanx again and keep up the good shnit...
~Caligari-87:iconCaligari-87: Feb 21, 2006, 5:41:49 PM
For having so many good poems you certainly haven't gotten a lot of attention, huh?

I don't think I could pick favorites from your gallery. It's not quite my style, but you're extremely good. The imagery is powerful, even though the words are sometimes confusing.

All in all, you've got a great collection here. Keep up the good work! I'll be watching you... :ninja:

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Mormon Missionay and proud of it! (Tacoma, Washington - August 2006 'til August 2008)

98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy and paste this into your sig.
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